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So here I lay now
Crossing the lines when you smile
For each time you laughed
And I can't help but
To find myself wondering
Why there are no more
You hide your face when I ask
No one tried too hard
To make an aching girl laugh
When she faked a smile
'Cause "She seems happy enough"
Crossing the lines when you smile
For each time you laughed
And I can't help but
To find myself wondering
Why there are no more
You hide your face when I ask
No one tried too hard
To make an aching girl laugh
When she faked a smile
'Cause "She seems happy enough"
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I was looking in the mirror this morning and saw a smile line, and "crossing lines when you smile" stuck in my head, then this happened. As far as form goes, I guess it's semi-haiku.
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I liked this because of its last stanza but i'm also completely sure that if you had turned this into a page long poem it probably would have been beautiful, if written the write way.